Sunday 17 January 2016

25 word pitch


18 comments:

  1. The pictures you have used work really well to express the genre of music that you are using for your magazine. However your title, although I like it, doesn't fit your genre as well as it could. Overall your idea is inspiring and works very well.

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  2. The images that you have used show that you have a clear idea about how you want your end product to look. The artists you have used link well with your genre. I think the finished product will be great.

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  3. The name 'Playlist' is creative but does not link with the rest of the magazine which is more festival and gig oriented. However your pictures represent the style and ideas well.

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  4. Your pitch presents your magazine well, it shows the themes and styles you will develop in your magazine. The name is very appropriate and portrays your genre well in combination with your images.

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  5. the way you have adopted your genre within your pitch and the way you want to represent your magazine works well. the name 'playlist' sounds somewhat mainstream but could be designed to look more festival orientated.

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  6. A very inspiring pitch, I liked the images that you have included to represent the style of your magazine. Maybe make it longer to give more detail.

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  7. This pitch is very inspiring, and it portrays your genre very well. The images you have used creates the audience to have an understanding of the genre.

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  8. I like the images you have used, they show what type of magazine you are going to make, I also like the name of your magazine.

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  9. the images you used to back your pitch had a positive effect and go along with the genre of your magazine

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  10. the images you used to back your pitch had a positive effect and go along with the genre of your magazine

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  11. I like the name of your magazine. I think it reflects the genre well.

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  12. I like this pitch as it gives an in depth representation of the genre your magazine features. I think that the name and pictures you have included give the audience a good idea of what to expect from the magazine.

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  13. Great target audience, I think your magazine will do well in the industry.

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  14. Good use of images to highlight your chosen genre. I think your ideas are really good.

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  15. Good use of images to highlight your chosen genre. I think your ideas are really good.

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  16. Good original ideas, maybe try including some existing magazines it is will be similar too in order to give the audience a better idea of what can be expected.

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  17. Good pitch. The use of images expresses the genre you are going for, the title works but could be improved.

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  18. Good pitch. The use of images expresses the genre you are going for, the title works but could be improved.

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